Table of Contents for Embracing Dark Desires by Dr Facer

Chapters: Embracing Dark Desires by Dr Facer

Story Notes:
Divergence from The Return onwards; knowledge of the comic is probably needed to understand some aspects of the story.

1. Chapter 1 (5973 words)

2. Chapter 2 (6643 words)

3. Chapter 3 (3680 words)

4. Chapter 4 (6148 words)

5. Chapter 5 (5502 words)

6. Chapter 6 (6808 words)

7. Chapter 7 (6831 words)



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Reviews for Embracing Dark Desires

Reviewer: Sebastian
Date: June 20, 2014 11:21 PM
Title: Chapter 5

I felt so sad for Kit in this chapter. She's the ultimate victim in this episode, her turning is not her fault but Mumm-Ra's and that evil sack of bones did a great work making sure of it.
And Kat's all Sith apprentice now...
Don't get me wrong, this is very well written and it is superbly told.
It's just gut wrenching, that's all.

Reviewer: Some guy Roamin' the Net
Date: November 26, 2012 11:33 PM
Title: Chapter 6

Best Fan Fiction I've ever read, no joke.

Reviewer: Khrysalis
Date: August 08, 2010 6:24 PM
Title: Chapter 4

What Kit said to the servant girl made my heart twist. Seeing what has happened to her compassion and her kindness in truly painful. While she's in Amon-Ra's arms, the last bit of defiance in her is nothing but a small flicker on its own lost in the lust Mumm-Ra inflicted on her. I don't know if this was young design, but I'm really having doubts that the others might be able to reach her, or WilyKat.

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to leave a review, I'm glad the story is interesting to you and that you are nejoying reading it. Once again, Thanks.

Reviewer: Khrysalis
Date: August 08, 2010 6:17 PM
Title: Chapter 3

More insight into how much more deeply that the twins slipped under Mumm-Ra's control, were brought around to his way of thinking. It's just...brilliant. Evil and depraved and brilliant.

Reviewer: Khrysalis
Date: August 08, 2010 6:14 PM
Title: Chapter 2

It's almost painful to see how poisoned the minds of the twins are. there is logic here, if they cared to be logical without Mumm-Ra's guidance. He kept them well, but he also frequently reminded them that they were slaves. Whatever their minds, twisted by his hands, are thinking, they aren't all that different from any other slaves. Perhaps they are even worse off, because the other slaves still remember who they are and what Mumm-Ra really is. Truthfully, I pity the twins for this. You've done an awesome, amazing job of characterization, especially of Mumm-Ra himself. He was always such a versatile evil.

Reviewer: Khrysalis
Date: August 08, 2010 5:08 PM
Title: Chapter 1

Being truthful, I was always torn by 'The Return' miniseries. I was three years old when I was first watching Thundercats, sitting cross-legged and wide-eyed on the floor in front of my grandma's TV table, and sometimes--even if it's merely the brightest of childhood cartoons--certain things stay with you all of your life. The Thundercats had a glory and a magic, and taught lessons of honor, courage, loyalty, friendship, and forbearance. On one hand, the Wildstorm comics were darkly facinating, with beautiful images and good storytelling...on the other hand, it tainted all of those good feelings, all of the glory and the magic. Replaced by a haunting feeling. I've kind of been squeamish around comics based on that universe since. However, I've looked on your story in curiosity, and I was glad I did. Don't get me wrong, this is still haunting! I'm still sad and hurt, and I hate Mumm-Ra's dry, brittle guts even more than I did when I was a child, but your writing is absolutely splendid. In this chapter, I found myself engrossed and horrified by Mumm-Ra's careful, honeyed, persuasive methods of brainwashing the Thunderkittens, and the way he still has his claws in them even while they are free from him, for a time. I think I shall be sticking with you on this until the end.